Tuesday, September 26, 2023

Tuesday

 Please make sure you share with me your questions from "The Montgomery Bus Boycott" if you have not done so. Essay will be due on Friday and you can take them home. I'm going to give you some example - but if you want an outline please let me know.

In-Class  QUIZ:


Write an Essay comparing “The Possibility of Evil”, “The Lottery”, and “Everyday Use” either by theme, character, symbolism, or irony.


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Thesis Statement
Clear and defendable thesis, hook and order of development connect with thesis
Defendable thesis, hook present
Thesis statement attempted, but might be clunky, wordy, or unclear
No thesis
Evidence
2 pieces of evidence for each point; evidence is analyzed and makes connections between the evidence and the thesis
Two pieces of evidence for each point; some analysis is made between the evidence and thesis but it might be taken out of context, misinterpreted or oversimplified
Evidence form at least two sources.  No analysis is made between the evidence and the thesis.
Body paragraphs either simply restates the thesis or the evidence is unclear or unrelated to the prompt; or less than two sources are provided.
Sophistication of Writing
Effective paragraph structures, high level vocabulary, vivid writing, varied sentence structures and effective rhetorical choices
Some high level vocabulary and some variety of sentence structures.  Some effective rhetorical strategies.
Essay use same words over and over again.  Sentences are wordy and/or clunky. 
Student makes sweeping generalizations or comparisons that are oversimplified.  Very little variety in word choice and sentence structure.
Grammar/Conventions
1-2 small mistakes that do not impair reading
3-5 small mistakes that do not impair reading
Many mistakes; and/or reading impaired by mistakes made
Writing is plagued with errors

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